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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
There's something in this chlorine scented air a code in rhyme scheme that's Very Clear for a full moon swoon these days aren't like those old sun rays that strayed that egg shell will crack in this ham and chicken caesar salad shack yellow yolk flows, white and runny just too yummy for a funky tan filled tummy the best way to say is to let certain songs say... "closest to the bone, sweeter is the meat the last slice of virginia ham is the best that you can eat" "Baby, won't you please come home" by Louis "the lips" and K. Smith this message is brought to you courtesy of the fine folks at Shiner Bock |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Catchy, funny and it sings! ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo martiniat8, Is this a beer advertisement? Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
martiniat8 - this is great, different, I like it... BC |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Lol No Robert its not, I put that there to take the edge off in case Clear read it, that in the first stanza should actually be a certain girl's name... but she's not on this forum, I put it on facebook first... I'm drinking a shiner now |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
A cute write, put me in a good mood this morning  Heart2Heart |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful and tasty. yann |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
LOL... I'm now enamored by a personal ad! Wonderful smile of whimsy and allure in your greenings.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'd like my tossed salad with a shiner AND a martini! lol Yer a hoot! Write on! Shine on!   EA |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
lol. thanks Angel |
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