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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2009-08-07 08:24 AM


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Blue on blue
To blue

It has come
To an end
And there is nothing
To fear

We have learned
What there is to learn

And now
It is time
To go home


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-08-07 08:52 AM


Nice. (but I'm not ready yet )
D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx
2 posted 2009-08-07 09:10 AM


So true to be blue where one feels black and blue
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-08-08 05:34 AM


I guess there's something to be said for being a slow learner, but seriously, you are so right.
                           Ida

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-08-08 06:15 AM


that is what experiences teach us, there is no such place like home...very good.

yann

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