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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2009-08-06 06:02 PM


HeArt Of The Uni-Verse Poet

A)
He-art beats inside the Art-istry of creation
Within the Uni-que Verse sailing spirit’s soul.
Inner core seed of inspirational germination
Spontaneous combustion gifted intellectual roles.

Uni-Verse within, Universe outside, cerebral hemispheres.
Vacation within, vocation outside, pleasure to work composition.
Introspection within, inspection outside, celestial Artmosphere.
Insight within, sight outside, extreme perceptual dimensions.

Poets must blossom beyond inner constrictions and outer restrictions.
Poetry must expand beyond inner limitations and outer boundaries.
Poetic verse must sing aloud inner vibrations onto outer harmonics.
Poetical conscience conceptions of inner visions baring outer history.

The poet’s quill is the sword of Truth’s blade bearing slashing lines
Furrowing into the darkness of deceit’s vile venom secret secretion.
Reigning down word’s gravity that has no human master to slave linage,
But resides within soul’s enlightenment upon God given gifts of completion.

B)
To fail and/or dwell in failure is a Politician,
To mold and/or conform is a Fraternity,
To bulldoze and/or crush is a Totalitarian,
To torture and/or abuse is the Inquisition-er
That bans, censures, and censors
Poetry’s Civil Liberties of Concrete Truth
Into the Dark Ages of Inquisition’s secrecy.
Where poet’s are a Dead Poets Society.

David Lester Young 08/06/09 © all rights owned by author
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time


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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2009-08-07 09:04 PM


Wow. What an amazing mouthful. This causes one to actually READ the thoughts portrayed, and takes a little thought of ones own and some work, but the point is well made.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
2 posted 2009-08-08 12:18 PM


This Uni-Verse unfolds the search for wholeness, and poets are never ending in that quest.  Reading in the depth of your lines, I found myself going back and looking again at the meaning, the lessons of experience and awareness, and the hope of balm and healing.

I am intrigued too, at the succinct patterns you weave visually, almost geometric in effect.     Very unique and arresting style...I enjoyed the read!

kl

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-08-08 12:49 PM


As you may know, dear DLY, I enjoy reading ~ and collecting ~ the thoughts of poets on poetry and on being a poet. Yours are fascinating ~ and very cleverly assembled in this poem.

Thank you, Poet!


EA

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