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crosscountry83
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0 posted 2009-08-05 12:45 PM



We all weep, eventually.
Mostly for who we love,
but for ourselves too
for me, it's always there, at the surface

I feel ready to break
It would feel better to be
a shattered piece of glass
at least the pain would be gone.

There's no point anymore,
but I get up in the morning,
knowing I can't stop the inevitable
someone, anyone, please end the hurt.

Rileigh

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1 posted 2009-08-05 03:35 PM




this is so sad...

Yoinn
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2 posted 2009-08-05 05:43 PM


Nice introspective piece Rileigh. I liked it.

Yoin

crosscountry83
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3 posted 2009-08-05 09:53 PM


Um.. I hate to sound uneducated, but what does introspective mean?
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2009-08-05 11:00 PM


CC, this truly aches. Whenever I have felt that way, I repeatedly say to myself out loud ~ "and this too, shall pass". ~ And thank goodness, it does. Perhaps not as quickly and painlessly as I would like, but it does pass.

introspection n. Contemplation of one's own thoughts, feelings, and sensations; self-examination. introspectional in ' trospec ' tional. www.answers.com/topic/introspection

Giving you a warm, compassionate hug,

EA

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