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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said you knew I could always look up to you as you stepped down from the horizon's pouting lip with that catherine kind of tempting purity and lest the keepers of the saints would reconsider how you, the woman of willows dances with her dawns long limbed and lovely, a lady tree writhing quietly then sipping from the brims of the dreamer's day swan sighed suggestions of high heeled glancing just a dance perhaps when shoulders would imagine some gypsy violin whispering its velvet moan and your lady ways down from sky in their gossamer pressed to my shadows of windows as butterflies that a statuary of leather men are always left considering ______________ daark (highway series) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-04-2009 09:12 AM).] |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Oh wow. Such a mastery of woven words. You are definitely a poet to follow, if one wishes to learn how to breathe out a dream. Well done. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, You sure drive an incredible highway - you and that bike of yours. It takes a man of words to see the way you do. And I am so glad that you are able to share with us. A |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
you have sucked the breath right from my mouth This is so beautiful it hurt...wow darkdaddy H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend Garapan, humble thanks to you for your comment ________ ali-san ms, thank you for your eye prints _____________ ms UBP, so..um can I come over and do some CPR? thanks lady!! |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Simply maavelus...writing and expression, a willow of a poem to be sure my new friend. Jan |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jb..thank you ms!! |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
wowza, dark. some gypsy violin whispering its velvet moan...good gosh man, i don't even know what to say! i'll say this-***intensely beautiful***-so i don't sound like a blubbering idiot. maranda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms maranda..you smile me with your smooth sooth ms, thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Breathtaking in its wholeness, and the above two lines are of the kind that make me gasp and want to skip and squeak in childish enthusiasm.  Some kind of leather man you are!! While wheels touch the asphalt your mind puts on wings of rare beauty and gathers words in flight. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie.. thanks little neighbor _____________ ms mar, thank you lady friend |
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