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Yoinn
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0 posted 2009-08-02 06:15 PM


bump bump

over and over
your head bumps wall
backwards staggering
love induced haze
climactic visions
of hallmark moments
never put to paper

tears for your own struggles
instead of wisdom and thought
lessons don’t learn themselves
not even a dent

bump bump

Yoin


Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

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1 posted 2009-08-03 08:13 PM


"climactic visions
of hallmark moments
never put to paper"

..yeah, I've had many of those.

Bump.

Yoinn
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2 posted 2009-08-03 09:43 PM


As I have too Kaoru

bump

Yoin

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