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Campfire Of A Minnesota Songwriter
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Campfire Of A Minnesota Songwriter |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Campfire Of A Minnesota Songwriter The notes crack in the fire among serenity’s background, Where one picks up a guitar to pluck it like an Angels harp Dancing string blends in heaven’s harmony of songwriters verse Surrounding music cascading Minnesota highlight crack sounds, Chorus of family enlightened surrounding memories in sharp Clarity radiating heartbeat’s melody of love of this Uni-Verse. Oh, Angel of musical creation leap forth among God’s gifts With a miracle spring inspiration that spreads your wings Singing in strength from within being blessed in spirits halo, Where your steps sail upon the night’s quivering voice lifting Your soul among the tranquil reflections silhouetting mind’s Resonance of mellow sensual radiance with Minnesota’s enhalo. Note: Dedicated to Nita, whose heart is pure musical gold notes. David Lester Young 08/01/09 © all rights owned by author De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (08-02-2009 12:20 AM).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I am a Minnesota girl and I greatly enjoyed this! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Alwye Thank You for your comment. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful song, dear David, for Nita. You created a very serene atmosphere and the sound was perceived intensely. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
DLY, your poem doth surely incite the angels to sing and play their harps. Blessings of joy to you and to Nita "whose heart is pure musical gold notes."  Love & Angel Light, Linda  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Margherita Thank You I did not write it as a song but for someone that was leaving for Minnesota. I appreciate your comment. Earth Angel Thank You and while I have only met Nita two or three times in person, she seems blessed with a successful image. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Your poems are a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Oklahoma Rose, what a delightful thing to say, Thank You |
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