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GBride
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0 posted 2009-07-28 09:36 AM


he Untimely Death of Bobby B.

Bobby B. fell down from a tree
that he fell head first was the key

He was eating hot dog
which caused his arteries to clog

He was married with grandkids
Oh yes, he padded some job bids.

Often he did drink too many beers
Which caused him to ogle some comely rears

So in his foolish lust
his dreams did turn to dust

When he was at coffee with his friends
They laughed at governments silly trends

They laughed, called others fools
But he played by same rules.

He fell from sky upon his head
and they pronounced him quite dead.

So he did go to the hot place
He was no special case.

If you are reading this my friend
Take care not to meet Bobby's end

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1 posted 2009-07-28 04:26 PM


I love limericks and this was almost along those lines, and such a cute story.
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2 posted 2009-07-29 04:43 PM


I consider myself duly warned!

~ Besides, I don't like 'hot' places! They make me perspire!

Perhaps next time around, he'll be more prudent! lol


EA

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