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Penwing
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since 2009-07-27
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Waverly, MN

0 posted 2009-07-27 06:28 PM


I want to see through anothers eyes.
to be indifferent and to see thtough all the hazy lies

will someone help me before the flame dies?

With the way I live, and the person i am
any more tourture to my soul would spell my demise

why will no one let me see?

Why will no one set me free?


[This message has been edited by Penwing (07-28-2009 11:08 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-27 06:45 PM


Welcome to Pip! Your first entry is quite impressive, being the teen you are. Your own eyes serve you well, I would say. The clearest view of everything will be when you use your heart to look at life. Rest assured that your soul endures more than you might imagine, it is kind of invulnerable to the storms of life.
Love and light.
Margherita

Penwing
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since 2009-07-27
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Waverly, MN
2 posted 2009-07-28 11:46 PM


thank you for the warm welcome i am already enjoying PIP!!!
priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
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india
3 posted 2009-10-07 04:34 AM


Ah! touched home...
I wish I could see too...
life would be easier...
nice write

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