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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-07-23 07:30 PM


         karma winds

old, lost-forest road swept
clean by pure moonlight.
tiny creatures of the night,
veiled in velvet mountain
  shadows,
sing a universal refrain
to deep, inscrutable time.
The cool-wind surprise
hints of impending
and immortal change.
at this edge of life’s abyss
lies the cosmic event horizon
where stars hang free and
dreams take wing...
on karma winds.

             --- b. e. adams (7/23/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
1 posted 2009-07-23 07:40 PM


very nice Mr. Adams

I love the word "Karma". I think i have a poem with it in it...i will have to check.

liked it

Yoin

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2009-07-23 08:10 PM


secondhanddreampoet

'where stars hang free and
dreams take wing...
on karma winds.'

now this is karma, well done...

BC


BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2009-07-23 08:35 PM


where stars hang free~~That's so lovely.  
I also like the word karma, because it's real.

Beautiful work~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2009-07-23 08:48 PM


This is a favorite, Bruce. Karma is in the wind alright.
                                 Ida

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2009-07-23 08:57 PM


One of your best, MHO.
You gotta love those karma winds.

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