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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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I am slowing down I am sinking Was once lost without you And then falling Finally felt so alive Let the walls crash down Opened wide to the world Never touching ground I read too much in signs And coincidences Laid naked and bare By all your hints and wishes I wonder still Playing what-if games If there was another way Universes could be the same There should be no harm Or fragile hearts in sway Only to share life as it comes Not to take it away But for now, I am under you For I am not over you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"If there was another way Universes could be the same There should be no harm Or fragile hearts in sway Only to share life as it comes Not to take it away" Nodding 'Yes' to this. And that ending....speaks volumes. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Laid naked and bare" ~ There is something very appealing about a man who is able to expose his vulnerability and be honest with himself and with others. "But for now, I am under you For I am not over you" ~ No woman could read those lines without uttering a little sigh...  EA |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
this is tender n'awlens i love it  shells my mind won't rest and I don't sleep... |
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