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sewasham
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0 posted 2009-07-23 09:43 AM



Goin' Nuts

Across the lawn and ‘round the tree
Pausing to look, “Where can it be?”
You hid it here or so you thought
But it’s not in your hiding spot

A flash of brown has caught your eye
And then you spot the guilty guy
You look about as if to say
“That bugger stole my nut away”

How dare he have the nerve to swipe
Your hard earned prize so sweet and ripe
But now you’re gonna make him pay
That dirty crook will rue this day

You stand up straight on tiny toes
He looks at you and off he goes
Right on his heels with bushy tail
He won’t escape, you’re on his trail

Round and round the tree you go
You start and stop, first fast then slow
Then up the tree right to the top
And down again without a stop

You peek around the trunk and then
The chase starts over once again
‘Til finally you claim your prize
Then hop away with sparkling eyes

You place your trophy in the ground
Warning your foe with chattered sound
“Best stay away, no “ifs” or “buts”
And keep your paws off of my nuts”

He looks at you then slinks away
But you know he’ll be back next day
This pesky guy is like no other
Because he is your little brother



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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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1 posted 2009-07-23 10:07 AM


heheheh!  I adore your poems!  Squirrels are so entertaining, exactly the way you describe.  I used to watch them and the chipmunks steal birdseed from the bluejays.  It was a war!

My daughter wrote about one of her neighbors who was in a war, himself, with the squirrels.  The squirrels won.  


I loved this, and the picture is a beauty, too.  

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (07-24-2009 01:06 PM).]

savedbygrace713
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2 posted 2009-07-23 10:14 AM


Terrific poem!  Great job sustaining the mood of the chase and getting so many stanzas out of the scene.

Traci

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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-07-23 10:25 AM


Squirrels want to play with you because you are a lubbable big nut!

I love squirrels ~ and nuts!

There's nuttin' about this poem that I don't like!

Loves 'n nuts,
Linda

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-07-23 12:34 PM


A delightful read, dear Stephen!

Tough fun!

Love,
Margherita  

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5 posted 2009-07-23 04:30 PM


I love those little buggers!!

I just recently put out a bird feeder, my first lol then I saw a squirrel in there and got him his own feeder!

such a cute write!

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2009-07-23 05:37 PM


This squirrel's eye view is so cute, Stephen.
                            ida

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