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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2009-07-20 06:53 PM


Judy's Coming Home

She left last week
with no words
saying goodbye.
There were no notes
nor messages,
only reasons
left to cry.

She didn't leave
on the best of terms,
perhaps thinking she
had bridges to burn.

No last words
to calm my fears,
nary a phone call
to make her
departure clear.

But late last night
as I sat sad and alone
she called to tell me
she wanted to come home.

"Yes Judy,
please come home."
Sans her presence,
I never felt
so sad and alone.

JamesLee
20July
2009




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1 posted 2009-07-20 07:34 PM


  Just love happy endings.
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2 posted 2009-07-20 09:33 PM


I like the story.

A

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-07-20 11:06 PM


Happy home-coming! Perhaps this could be the beginning of a new journey together!


Linda


LindsayP
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4 posted 2009-07-22 12:34 PM



I'm so glad for your sake James that she has decided to come home, I'm sure it's not much fun being alone, good luck my friend.

Lindsay

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5 posted 2009-07-22 05:06 AM




Had to catch that sweet smilie from Sharon to express my joy for the happy outcome, for you dear James, romantic soul.

Those peace-making moments are the best!

Love,
Margherita

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6 posted 2009-07-22 08:51 AM


happy end James, I am glad for you.

yann

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