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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-07-19 11:38 PM


Tempting Rainbows
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martiniat8
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1 posted 2009-07-20 12:04 PM


"in the clouds of mindlessness" Love that!
Alison
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2 posted 2009-07-20 01:35 AM


BC,

This is haunting in its beauty.

A

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-07-20 02:41 AM


We all think about what might have been as we get older. Enchanting poem and picture.
                                    Ida

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2009-07-20 04:41 AM


nice
2islander2
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5 posted 2009-07-20 06:58 AM


magnificent, a moment of happiness.

yann

Heart2Heart
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6 posted 2009-07-20 09:32 AM


Hi Bill, I tried to read this poem during my lunch break at work, but couldn't open it.  Seems they've blocked for images on the internet.  Anyway, the idea of being "encapsulated in tempting rainbows" is so delicious and enrapturing.  A very fine write my friend that sends me to realms of enchantment.
Heart2Heart  

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2009-07-20 12:09 PM


martiniat8- at times those clouds surely get mindless...

Alison - you're very gracious, thank you...

Marchmadness - wouldn't it be nice if one could go back a few years...

1slick_lady - thank you

Heart2Heart - I can only imagine what it would be like to be wrapped in rainbows. So very enchanting indeed...

BC

Rose of Sharon
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8 posted 2009-07-20 11:16 PM


Bill,
       They say, there is a pot of gold
at the end of a rainbow. This poem is  indeed golden.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2009-07-20 11:26 PM


Fortunate is she who finds you at the end of a rainbow!


Linda

Billie Cullimore
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10 posted 2009-07-20 11:28 PM



As we get older there are a lot of might have beens. But if we let them drift on the rainbows we may catch them some day.

Love 'un stuff
Billie C.

Margherita
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11 posted 2009-07-21 06:40 AM


Dear Bill, temptingly beautiful. You involve and touch the reader with your heart reflections, which sparkle in rainbow colors.

Love,
Margherita

Ariana
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12 posted 2009-07-21 09:49 PM


Bill

If only we could relive our lives over and correct the "might have beens". I have always loved poems with rainbows for rainbows have moments of the past right down to the future with the "pot of gold".


Enjoyed
Ariana

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13 posted 2009-07-21 09:54 PM


awwww!! this is so sweet...I always enjoy reading you
LindsayP
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14 posted 2009-07-21 10:02 PM



Another great poem Bill, as usual.

A spectaular photo with its double rainbow
With words to match. Take care my friend.

Lindsay

brneyedgrly
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15 posted 2009-07-21 11:08 PM



mr romance strikes again




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