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lilmissflyaway
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since 2009-01-19
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ohio,usa

0 posted 2009-01-20 07:52 AM


what do you see
when you look at me
do you see the real me
ot the fake me
my false facade
do you see
the real me
how broken i am inside
or do you see the fake me
and how unbroken i seem
what do you see
are you just
gonna be like everyone else
and not take that chance
that risk
when you look at me
what do you see
the girl i appear to be
or the real me
what do you see


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1 posted 2009-01-20 08:14 AM


Wow I was reading this and It reminded me of one of my poems that I wrote.. It almost sounded just like this. lol. This poem is still good though.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

guruhkcs
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since 2009-01-20
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2 posted 2009-01-20 08:19 AM


This is a very nice poem
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