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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-09-30 10:56 PM

Yes, I know the rhyming is off but I don't really care.
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You know you always put me down,
I always feel so broken.
Is there no such thing as hospitality,
Or have you taken that too?

I can't run from you,
I can't ever hide,
These feelings will stick,
after all, you're in my mind.

Can't I at least get a break,
or some time to breathe?
You've destroyed everything.
All my happy endings.

Give up your way,
It would help me out a lot.
Please, don't stay.
I can't stand it anymore.

Get out of my head and leave me to live.
I don't want to hear you screaming anymore.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (10-01-2009 09:46 PM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2009-10-02 01:06 AM

Em, I loved this!!!
Krysti

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-10-03 07:16 PM

Love it Emmalee.

Haven't heard from ya in a while. Whats up? :]

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2009-10-04 07:03 PM

Hey, thanks for reading.
There's not a whole lot going on, just the usually craziness. I just got home from the second rehearsal weekend of CMYC (Central Manitoba Youth Choir) so im pretty tired, but ya know..

Thanks again for reading.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

4 posted 2011-04-21 07:40 PM

i loved it

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2011-05-08 11:29 PM

=] Thank you.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

*tori_rose*
Junior Member

since 2010-10-12

Posts 44
Weber City, VA

6 posted 2011-07-06 10:13 PM

i love this an can truly relate

~*tori*~

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

7 posted 2011-07-09 01:38 AM

thank you =). though im sorry that you can relate. It wasn't a part of my life that was enjoyable and im sure you feel the same.

You'll be in my thoughts. =)

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

theladypoet21
New Member

since 2011-09-13

Posts 8
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2011-09-13 07:41 PM

This was a great poem, although sad, I can relate.

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

9 posted 2011-10-03 08:23 PM

Loved it!! Love your choice of words-
I don't want to hear you screaming anymore.!

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