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you are inside of my heart
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you are inside of my heart |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
You are inside of my heart You are inside my memories Just thinking about you Is killing me inside It feels Like thorns Pricking My heart The Memories That I had With you Are unforgettable But thinking About all this Makes me feel Aggravated Makes me Feel inexpressive Because I really Want you I just don’t know What to do Your face Is in my mind Your nice Sweet caring voice Rings through my ears Slowly day by day You are killing me Inside But you just don’t Notice it How my heart Is thirsty Just to be with you You are inside of my heart You are inside my memories Just thinking about you Is killing me inside |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Really nice poem... expressive I can really understand what you mean... The worst part is that there is nothing you can do about it... |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
yea i knooow  i liked ppl no one liked mee i read some of ur poems too and they are really good i mean i could never write like that these ppl write way better than me thats what i think. in the future i want to be a poet/writer from ur name i think that ur a indian right my name is madiha nice ot meet you |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
High level of skill... good read. Looking forward for more poems of this standard. Keep writing  M |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thanksss |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Hello Madiha nice to meet you too. I'm sorry for replying so late, but I saw you post just today. Have been away since a while. Thank you, glad you liked my poems. Your style of writing is really good. I'm sure you'll suceed in being just that- A good poet/writer.And yes I'm from India |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
no problem i have written some new ones recently in the dark poetry and teen poetry i hope tht you will enjoy them thats cool that you are from india |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Looking at them now actually! So have you ever visited India? |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
no not really but i know ppl from there hehe |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Oh okay, thats nice! |
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