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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
Posts 79
0 posted 2009-09-20 08:33 PM

We live in a world where dark prevails
over light.
Where
the badguy wins.

We let satan use us
like dolls.
And we stray from
God; like a dog on a leash.

We should stand up,
and belt out to the
world:
"I'm angry as ****! And I will not let this go!"

..Free verse..
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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal
1 posted 2009-10-04 10:48 PM

Provacative. I like the emotion and the last couple of lines.

There is power in the pen.
priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
2 posted 2009-10-06 11:46 AM

I strongly agree...
I like the last lines too!!
Just too good
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