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Teen Poetry #9

whiskey blooded

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2009-08-20 08:04 AM

i was sitting in the middle of a thunderstorm last week in a little place called space camp, alaska. lol (not really alaska) and i wrote a poem when i came inside.

crimson streaks of deep burgandy
are lighting up the sky
the melodic falling of the heavens
shows the world can truly cry

and maybe, somewhere in the future
ill remember being here
lost inside thoughts
of dry spots and raindrops
with the worries and the fears

the rhythmic pounding of the rain
has me caught up in a trip
of being as far away as possible
from this terminal of quit

a little bit of whiskey
runs through my veins
and maybe there right
maybe im to blame
as i i sit all alone
with my bottle in the rain

ill drink the last drop
and then ill fall asleep
to the sound of the rain
enveloping me.

stacylynn418
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 40
new york

1 posted 2009-08-20 10:00 AM

this is great. i really enjoyed reading it :]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-08-20 06:04 PM

Dude this is my favorite of yours, no doubt.

I really like it. I really liked the first few stanza's.

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