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Teen Poetry #9

My Super Hero

nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

0 posted 2009-05-21 04:28 PM

I saw your picture
In a frame
Smiling through
The pain
Your love and faith
Forever enduring
Your strength
Through it all
You didn't have
To fight this battle
You knew the fate
To come
You could have
Let it overcome
Without the fight
Yet you still
Hung on
Your love for others
So strong
You didn't want
Them to hurt
So you took the pain
And gave out smiles
Your heart
Overflowing with love
You may have lost
The battle against ALS
But yours the victory to keep
Your in heaven
And even though your gone now
Mamma you'll always be
My super hero

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

moonbeam

Member Elite

since 2005-12-24

Posts 2356

1 posted 2009-05-22 05:33 AM

Welcome to Passions

It's great to see you posting here . I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses. Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together. (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting).

All the best.

Rob - Moderator/Passions in Poetry

Zaineb
Junior Member

since 2009-05-22

Posts 27
Denmark

2 posted 2009-05-22 10:23 AM

This is soo good, the pain in this is soo strong, and I really enjoy to read it.

Rosie_Orange
Junior Member

since 2009-04-20

Posts 46
South Africa

3 posted 2009-05-22 03:18 PM

well done for your first poem! i really liked it! keep it up

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

4 posted 2009-05-22 08:07 PM

Welcome to Pip!!!

Nice first post!

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

5 posted 2009-05-29 06:26 PM

Thank you I wrote this one right after my mom died and i wright best when I am angry or upset, my feeling come through a lot easier.

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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