Teen Poetry #9 |
just listen |
kiwie15:D Junior Member
since 2009-03-05
Posts 13california |
confusing emotions running through my head so many to choose from easier done then said i want you but then i dont what i feel for you is hard to cope a lot or a little or is there no hope you say you don't like me but you give me clues that you do i am sorry you that you dont have the guts to say I LIKE YOU!!! things are starting to clear up i kno me decision and this is the end you and me is my vision now here is the hard part let me tell you what i have to say cause if i dont i will have to pay i like you and i like you a lot i hope you like me too because this is the truth the next step is all you. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Awe. good first post. Welcome to pip, {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love that, "the next step is all you" that takes guts and is very brave of you to put your feelings out there like that. Good for you!! Better to take that leap then to wonder for the rest of your life, "what if I would have just said" welcome to pip *please check your email for a special greeting! |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
ok i really really loved this poem!!!!!! <3 i love u<3 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I really like this, especially the way you ended it. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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