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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

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TN

0 posted 2009-02-26 09:40 PM

Ha! Got majorly bored...

Intense emotions lack all sound
As peace descends and hits the ground
The rain begins to fall around
It carries peace as rivers pound

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12

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CA, USA

1 posted 2009-02-26 09:42 PM

yay, are butts must be happy, to give us all these poems lol

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

GothicCherry
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TN

2 posted 2009-02-26 09:47 PM

You used the wrong 'are' lol

And yupps yupps...I sorta hope no one reads these lol

freeand2sexy
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3 posted 2009-02-26 09:48 PM

oh yeah sry, OUR butts, lol, and me too.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

GothicCherry
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4 posted 2009-02-26 09:53 PM

Yay for correct spelling!! (&& poem farts HA!) Gosh no one NO ONE better read this lol

freeand2sexy
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5 posted 2009-02-26 09:55 PM

They probably will, but who cares, i'm sure they'll read both our poem farts

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

GothicCherry
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6 posted 2009-02-26 10:06 PM

Yeaaa, I'm just glad Zack hasn't read mine yet...I'm sure he thinks us crazy enough...LOL! && Moonbeam too...

freeand2sexy
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7 posted 2009-02-26 10:09 PM

i wonder what moonbeam will think of our farts, i think they're beautiful, but that's just me.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

moonbeam

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8 posted 2009-02-27 04:16 AM

Well at least the poem was beautifully metrical! See, you can't help writing in meter now.

I think though that it might be nearly time to work on WHAT you are writing as well as HOW.

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
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9 posted 2009-02-27 08:25 AM

HaHa!! This is the effect of teens being hyper, silly, and bored!!

Yeah, it's probably time to work on that.

GothicCherry
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TN

10 posted 2009-02-27 08:30 AM

Ahhh! Meter is haunting me...I even DREAMED in meter last night.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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11 posted 2009-02-28 04:13 PM

O.o Okay this poem is good.. but dreaming in meter???? Oookayy then.....

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

12 posted 2009-02-28 08:55 PM

LOL.. you guys make me laugh

LOVE THIS POEM.. It's great...

As for meter.. I'm not even going to attempt.. lol.. My brain is far to fazzled to even attempt lol.

GothicCherry
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13 posted 2009-03-01 07:13 PM

Glad we can brighten someone's day lol

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