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Teen Poetry #9

Circles

LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2014-01-14 02:20 AM

I know, i've been running in circles
Don't even know, what i'm chasing anymore
Holding on, to a feeling that i used to feel
Wondering was it real?

Freedom calls, and i don't know how to answer
Freedom waits for me
But i'm running in circles

I'm remember, the way you used to make me feel
And it felt so good
Now i wonder, was it real or in my head
I wish i could go back

Freedom calls, and i don't know how to answer
Freedom wait for me
But i'm stuck trying to remember

And I have been in love
And I have remembered
There was was a time when
We loved and,
Not a thing in the world could bring us down
Now i remember, what i'm chasing
They're not just circles anymore

And i have realized
Freedom was with you
As long as we don't remember

memento mori

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-01-15 04:13 PM

A very good sequence of emotions, among which I found this line to be most profound within the many offered:

quote:

Freedom calls, and i don't know how to answer

It seems you found the elusive end of a circle.

...just bein' Bluesy

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