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samstone
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since 2012-12-03
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0 posted 2012-12-03 07:37 PM


The Scarlet Letter consumes my life
with Tales of Hester Prynne
In all her sin
And a priest f*cking a woman not his wife.


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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
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1 posted 2013-04-30 01:47 AM


Welcome to pip!

Haha!  This one got a chuckle out of me!  While I can't honestly say I like the flow of the 3rd line (something longer might have worked better), I can definitely say that overall I really like this.  Hoping to see more from you!

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