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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-03-11 06:29 PM



I'm here sitting on
the cold moist sand, the
cerulean water
which gently tickles
my feet as if it
was a grass, the wind
softly whispers into
my ear and
caresses my dark
brown hair and me who
is reposed at the
moment, forgetting
about my surroundings
forgetting about
my problems, the
sunset in the sky
makes my heart feel at
ease, it looks like
an exquisite canvas
with unique colors
that are blended
together creating
a new different
piece I'm here sitting
at the beach and
looking at the beautiful
sunset that soothes me
making me feel I'm
in some kind of island
and being all alone
forgetting about everything

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-03-24 03:16 PM


Very meaningful, very beautiful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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