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stacylynn418
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since 2009-03-06
Posts 40
new york

0 posted 2010-08-09 10:54 AM


Love of mine, speak softly.
These things can't be erased.
Every time I kiss those lips,
The words leave bitter tastes.

Love of mine, watch kindly.
Your judgments never fade.
I search your eyes for love long lost,
And find only hollow space.

Love of mine, be gentle.
My body's stronger than my heart.
I touch your skin to feel you,
While inside I fall apart.

© Copyright 2010 stacy carter - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2010-08-16 06:40 PM


This is great! I enjoyed reading it!!!

"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"  
- Unknown

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-01-02 06:09 AM


Gentle, intelligent, such a beautiful whisper.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Sara Mikael
Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34

3 posted 2011-01-03 09:09 AM


it's woowwwwww
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