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Teen Poetry #9

Side-effects of love.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2010-01-31 04:38 PM

I invented the word "coyish" so no I am not wrong. :P
I was inspired by the beat of Laroux's songs. I rather like this poem. Don't like how long each sentence is though.
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Remind me where I was when I took the fall
Spring in my step, falling into the darken cracks
Loosing my many bits and left with words to scrawl
Dirt under nails; I crawl back on the track

Take a dive and make a way through rat race
Been there. Done that. Love's a simple game
Take my time. I'm no rush. Mind the pace
Ignoring who I was and what I became

Remind me again when happiness is at its full
For I've been forgotten and it feels so long
Now my heart's on strings, always on the pull
By lovers and their coyish songs

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