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loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11
Posts 48


0 posted 2010-01-25 09:03 PM



no one knows just who i am.
know one knows just what i do.
they have no idea about my life.
yet they still judge.
as if you have the right
as if you could see beyond the surface.
well thats not true,
i know you could see past everything all the walls and smoke screens,
but your afraid,
afraid to ruin your perfect little lives.
but no one knows,
because they chose not to.
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First poem in a while....

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Jeremy
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since 2010-01-29
Posts 14

1 posted 2010-01-29 05:00 PM


Not bad
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