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Murder |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
You need to listen. Please- just stop and think. I know... I hope... that no one could ever try to be that- rude, that- disrespectful. You need to stop and listen. Please- just hear what you are saying. Because I know... I hope... that you would never try to be that- cruel that- hateful. Please- realize that your words... your insults- listen when I say they matter; they hurt. Listening to you: I would rather, much rather, stick my hand in a blender. Because at least then I could see the- blood the- reason for the pain. Then people would- notice would- help. But your words, they don't leave blood... or gore. They just simply... tear, shred, mangle... but in a place where nobody sees. In a place where nobody cares. You need to listen. Because your words are draining me slowly- ever so slowly- of blood... of life. You need to listen. Stop and hear yourself. Because... you- you are slowly- ever so slowly- letting me bleed to death. You need to listen. Because you are killing me. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
A murder worse than killing someone. Excellent substance well penned with real power and emphasis. Powerful, raw and emotive. Beautiful. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Britt_Brat Junior Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 37Knoxville, TN |
Wow I like the flow of this poem, and i can feel the emotion within the word. Good work Lost & wondering till I'm found |
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