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sammy9698
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since 2010-10-16
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0 posted 2010-10-16 04:46 PM


She turned to the light as she went blind.
Wandering if it was all a lie.
Her body burned, No more she begged.
Her raging heart was a desperate cry of insanity.
The Voices yell in her head.
She cried for protection.
she lied out of desperation.
the Blinding light dimmed, and faded to nothing but a lifeless shadow as she fell to her knees.
The voices went silent and inside she was finally alive.
There was now a place for her peace.

<3

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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-10-19 01:19 AM


When overactive they are "Voices", and when that's finally over, "voices"... I'm glad for the entire person to be able to enjoy peace and freedom at last! Best wishes to her.

Good write.

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-01-31 11:52 PM


Frightening insight. Good poem.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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