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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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By all means, tell me about myself Take me down the narrow passages of your mind through the warped doorways of your reasoning and understanding Reveal to me who I am Use your vulgar and ignorant tongue to mangle every good thing Underestimate me and judge me incorrectly By all means, make yourself small in my eyes Parade your completely irrevelant and incorrect opinions In an attempt to put me back in my place... Beneath your exalted feet Go ahead, tell me about myself Tell me again how foolish I've been to naively make up my own mind and choose my own direction Tell me of the superior intellect required to so entirely misjudge not just one but every single person you meet, see or hear about Please astonish us we are all waiting If I don't say it...who will? |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
My feelings exactly. This is a well articulated piece, the words feel like knives. This was my favorite line: "through the warped doorways of your reasoning and understanding" |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Yeah, sometimes people just make you so crazy! Thank you for reading my ramblings. If I don't say it...who will? |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Fine writing. |
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