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pyre
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since 2008-05-16
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0 posted 2009-01-02 04:19 AM



I keep hearing her song
I can see her face
I wish it were legal
To have and hold a gun
A dear sweet friend
To have and hold forever
Like black lace and leather
And a flamming feather

Gentle the flames
Slow the cage
Deep the rage
Black the light
In which I fight

My war is real
I love real
To be real
Infinite and real
Tonguing steal
I want to feel
Something real

I come to him
And he's messed himself
He doesn't know
He doesn't care
Ignorance to my despair
The loving father
Of a whipping boy

Fool
The fool is fool
Fool
The fool is fool
Fool
The fool is fool
Fool
The fool is a fool

Does she pray, or am I prey?  

© Copyright 2009 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
1 posted 2009-01-08 08:22 AM


I've read it several times and I might be missing something. I'll give it another go though...
chopsticks
Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888
The US,
2 posted 2009-01-08 08:32 AM


“ I've read it several times and I might be missing something.”

I don’t think so .


pyre
Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136

3 posted 2009-01-16 02:32 AM


thank you.  that comes as somewhat of a compliment that my art is actually art.

Does she pray, or am I prey?  

pyre
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since 2008-05-16
Posts 136

4 posted 2010-02-21 10:38 PM


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