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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. 
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I don't call out to the night. because it may be listening. I don't hold on to dreams In case I'd choke them dead. I don't wander in the wilderness. At least not lately. I don't ever remember being more easily led. God put the wind in your hair and gave you that beautiful smile. You dance with your arms in the air. You can't help but showing off your lovely style. I don't follow in the wake of ships as big as buildings. I don't hold on to friends as well as I once could. I don't harbor the resentments that wait to destroy me. I don't ever remember seeming so misunderstood. The last thing my father said to me was just one word. "LOVE" And I been searching ever since. I don't know what to do. I couldn't be the man I hope to be in just one life. I'd all but givin up and that's when I found you. God put the wind in your hair and gave you that beautiful smile. You dance with your arms in the air. You can't help but showing off your lovely style. Rick Delmonico |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Indeed, your "work in progress" is even "better"! Smiling here! ~ and sighing again!   EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
don't follow in the wake of ships as big as buildings. I don't hold on to friends as well as I once could. I don't harbor the resentments that wait to destroy me. I don't ever remember seeming so misunderstood. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I wasn't kidding when I told you I was a fan, and you never disappoint radman. This seems a bit sad, yet the wind in her hair, her beautiful smile, and the way she dances.....was the happiest part... simply because the way others see us often conflicts with our own self image. Just my take. This was really nice, and even "better" Happy Saturday, bud~ |
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