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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-08-19 11:06 PM


this one didnt come out quite right
it says what i feel but not how i want it too

It’s like waking up to a new world
Then it’s all gone
When nothing has going right
You have to stare and think of a new way of life
Nothing I do will ever put this to an end
I don’t want to find a new person to share
Everything I want to know with is leaving me
I want to sit and look up at the stars
But all I see is everything ending up wrong
I would do everything for her
But she wont believe a word I say
Now I have a reason to tell
The side of me you didn’t find out
I wanted to tell you everything
But you wouldn’t believe me
About the things I would do for you
I would do everything at your will
Even wait at your feet
If you couldn’t tell I’m crazy about her
And have been for some time



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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
1 posted 2008-08-20 10:23 AM


Sounds like a sad place you are in at the moment.Keep looking at the stars letting the wind touch your face. If there are tears...let the sun kiss your cheeks and tickle your nose.
Keep writing it is a great release for many things that go on in life.
Hugs
BonBon

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