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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-08-19 01:23 PM


As the moonlight whispers
to the clouds of dawn
it becomes all to clear
that I'm no longer gone.

The path of horrid animosity
beckons to the violent nature
of my inner self, yet....
I reject it somehow.

It holds on to my ankles,
it's grip is tight, tighter then
the hold it had before.

Will this pain go away..
or is it because of my will,
it stays.

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-08-20 11:06 AM


You express yourself very well!

Shake those ankles and let go ...

Write on, with every word the burden will be lightened.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-08-20 07:49 PM


Yo Angel,

You're doing okay. Keep up the good work.

Bobby

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