navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Sycamore Sue
Open Poetry #43
Post A Reply Post New Topic Sycamore Sue Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-07-11 09:13 AM



You won't find her
in her morning glory mood
nor in her prism
of shine on shine on blues,
ahead of the wind
and battling
the surrogate scholars
of mom and pop
prophesies,
when you're zooming in
on the shot
of pink pageantry,
as she cradles
her tearoses,
daffodil dreamers
beneath the
indigenous green,
she's always
a leaf, sometimes two,
into the hype
of next season.




[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-12-2008 09:24 AM).]

© Copyright 2008 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-07-11 11:57 AM


she's always
a leaf, sometimes two
into the heights
of next season.


Your poetry always captivates me, it's beyond all seasons ...

Love,
Margherita


XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-11 06:27 PM


Again, just another really unique piece of awesome writing. Made me smile to read this. Probably because I got what I came in expecting!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2008-07-12 05:16 PM


Goddess, if I ever miss a post of yours, please email me!!!

BIG hug for your BIG talent!

EA

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2008-07-12 05:17 PM


You won't find her
in her morning glory mood
nor in her prism
of shine on shine on blues,
ahead of the wind

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Damn straight!!!   I adore your whimsy and rough edges,
and that private label of ink you got going is something else entirely.


Only you, good goddess~    


Richy
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

5 posted 2008-07-13 02:04 PM



Dear Goddess,

I’m thinking that I would like her,
If she was a sycamore,
or a Sue.

Into the hype,
notwithstanding.

Rich

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
6 posted 2008-07-13 07:08 PM


An outstanding write, Mish!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Sycamore Sue

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary