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Open Poetry #43

Go for the Gold!

Danny Cobb
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since 2008-07-09

Posts 74

0 posted 2008-08-08 06:47 PM

for
all the
athletes that
give us their all
spectacular feats
of strenuous efforts
to win the highest honor
for their particular country
we salute them in giving their best
amazing us with their accomplishments!

Summer Olymics 2008

[This message has been edited by Danny Cobb (08-09-2008 06:39 AM).]

MOCindy
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since 2008-07-30

Posts 73

1 posted 2008-08-08 06:52 PM

absolutely wonderful. Love every words of it.

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-08-08 07:49 PM

Yo Danny,

The idea behind this is fine. I'd try and do something with that double "that".

Bobby

Danny Cobb
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since 2008-07-09

Posts 74

3 posted 2008-08-09 06:45 AM

Thanks CINDY for the Kind Words!

Thanks sir JORDAN for the careful reading and catch--I completely messed that one. Thanks to you I got it out of there!

I appreciate it and I appreciate all who take the time to read and ponder.

danny cobb

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-08-10 06:33 AM

Danny... this is wonderful! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2008-08-10 09:01 AM

Danny~
I adore your poetic podium~

To ALL of those who compete
may the blessings flow ...
so that they know ...
we are behind them all~

To even reach the Olympics is such a feat~

Thanks for this honor to them~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-08-10 12:35 PM

Such a lovely tribute and perfect presentation!

Love,
Margherita

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