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Open Poetry #43
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Inspired-8
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0 posted 2008-08-07 03:19 PM


Who would believe
And understand
These feelings conceived
Consuming this man
No longer the voices
All become one
Ideation of choices
Self understanding has come
Pray to my Jesus
My weakness has won
Though I darken my lamp
His forgiveness shines on

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MOCindy
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1 posted 2008-08-07 03:35 PM

very good. Love the last two verses.
Though I darken my lamp
His forgiveness shines on
C
Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-08-09 03:59 PM

Very beautiful, Vic! Your awareness of His love and forgiveness touches me.

Love,
Margherita
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