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Open Poetry #43

Certain Questions

ChrisTonner
Junior Member

since 2008-08-06

Posts 24

0 posted 2008-08-07 09:04 AM

Certain Questions

Circular ideas dancing throughout my head
feeling alone but surrounded by people.
Different moments seeking a final answer
but concluding on a state of mind,
not a fault of personality.

What do I do if its me?
Framed as a lonely man
persuing pleasurable ends.
But I cant change the gap
only endure until the finish.

Aug '08'

MOCindy
Member

since 2008-07-30

Posts 73

1 posted 2008-08-08 02:02 PM

good. self-analyzing.
c

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2008-08-08 03:23 PM

A state of mind perhaps changes the gap and then perhaps we live instead of enduring. I'm busy trying that out so I can't say for sure yet.

Helen

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-08-10 07:00 AM

enjoyed this Chris... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-08-10 04:17 PM

Enjoyed the Write Chris!

ARCTIC WIND

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