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ChrisTonner
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since 2008-08-06
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0 posted 2008-08-06 07:21 AM

Limbo of Pleasure.

I am in a limbo of pleasure,
set high, floating on waves of delight.
Never want this feeling to end,
She gives meaning to my day,
warmth to my night.

In her company I am complete,
my mind is full, my heart
brimmed through.
I want to dance, to sing,
to show my hand.

Always she will be on my mind,
in my soul.
Dancing in my thoughts,
forever my love.

(for Claire)
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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-08-06 08:03 AM

Cool write...
ChrisTonner
Junior Member
since 2008-08-06
Posts 24
2 posted 2008-08-06 01:12 PM

Thanks amusemi, means a lot to get a comment, especially a nice, positive one.
CMP
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since 2008-07-23
Posts 22
England
3 posted 2008-08-06 02:53 PM

i love it...thankyou x
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