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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
finally i'm posting new poems, new creations. that's good news for me.., i had some kind of block it seems. i hope you enjoy this one! Moment tell me how the sun goes down while you talk i'll think about your eyes and your smile i'll think about all the kisses i'll give you all this while you are talking 'cause your eyes turn on my dreams tell me how the leaves of a tree are falling i'll just think about how my life will change from now on i'll think about how lucky i am i'm sure you'll notice that my eyes are shining 'cause next to you i can forget all my pain and misery and replace them with love if you managed to heal me just with your hands what will happen if you kiss me? and god knows i won't forget to give you my heart just for a moment single moment holding your hands and smiling thinking about your eyes |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
I do enjoy this one, very much! Wonderfully romantic, without being sappy as a forest (like I can be at times). All the wonders of nature, and it's still just window dressing to surround the most wonderful thing of all, sorta like all those angels and such surrounded Venus in Botticelli's famous painting. Reminded me of that. And I know how that feels...to see the woman you love that way... Keeping..just as I keep memories of her.. "Now if I seem to be afraid to live the life that I have made in song, well it's just that I've been losing for so long" -- Jackson Browne, 'These Days' |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This reminded me of something I told a guy once--my "crush" on him was so apparent I never tried to hide it, as it would have been futile. But he was saying something, I still can't recall, but I interrupted him and said, "If you want me to remember any of this--you're going to have to stand a little farther away." smile...he didn't move. And nope, while I remember the moment--don't ask what we were discussing!  sweeeeeeeet! Thank you.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
tell me how the sun goes down while you talk i'll think about your eyes and your smile i'll think about all the kisses i'll give you all this while you are talking 'cause your eyes turn on my dreams......................" , A sweet moment to treasure!ARCTIC WIND |
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