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DreamerSpirit
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0 posted 2008-08-03 10:28 PM


I am unable to express with words how i feel now that finally i got to write again.
It's been months of diferent dificult situations that just took my writing away, simply put.

finally i'm back, and although some time has passed i'm sure the people i remember are still here.
I'm back and i hope this time will be definitely.


well, as for my poem, this one is one of the last i wrote before everything went down.


Dreamer's Exile

a long walk
the dreamer has left
exile, the word itself made him cry
a long road
he will have to follow
in order to survive

a sad smile
he had received
as a farewell gift
along with a suit case
full of tears and memories
exile wasn't something he could easily accept
and he was now living it

a cold hug
a quick handshake
and finally
i'm sorry was pronounced
he was finally on the road
exiled, because of his dreams

where did he went?
wish i could know
he doesn't know where he is going either
he only knows where he's been

a year has passed
since the dreamer's exile
he never came back
and people dream no longer

where are you dreamer?
don't give up
don't let betrayal take you down
only you can show us
another world
only you can show us how to change
only you can show us
how the moon looks
from the dreamer's world.

---------------------------------------------

it's great to be back.


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1 posted 2008-08-04 12:18 PM


DreamerSpirit~
Welcome home ... it is always a blessing when words bring us back to the circle of friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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