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Inspired-8
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-08-03 08:11 PM



Tossing turning

Rolling high

Constant churning

The ocean inside

Wave after wave

Feelings do crash

Pounding the surf

Receding as fast

Watching the sprays

Imprinting the sands

Creating today

Tides of this man...
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1 posted 2008-08-04 12:20 PM


Victor~
Ooooh ... I do like this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2008-08-06 05:25 PM


What a wonderful way to describe your emotions!

- Owl

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