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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2008-07-30 02:42 PM

Few words,
Breathed
Against
Me –
And I become your
Page.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2008-07-30 04:55 PM

Eric - your few words can cover a book never mind a page because they grow in the mind of the reader.

Helen

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-07-30 05:08 PM

Very poetic Ericc-- I loved the ending of your poem
Just Perfect!

ARCTIC WIND

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2008-07-30 06:23 PM

One timeless page
Rewritten in each
press of lips
between us

You inspire.
Thank you for writing these

MOCindy
Member

since 2008-07-30

Posts 73

4 posted 2008-07-30 06:35 PM

This is a very clever one.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-07-30 06:38 PM

Yo Ericc,

You cover a lot of ground with only a few words. Very good.

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-07-30 07:36 PM

A page to caress and read over and over again, dear Eric!

Very very beautiful!

Margherita

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

7 posted 2008-07-30 08:12 PM

I am so impressed with this... Not only for the power of its simplicity, the beauty of its image, the clarity of vision, but its depth.
Think about this...
Not only a book page - reflecting the words that were put down - breathed...

but the historical page who was placed in service to his knight - reflecting the teachings of the higher order.

I see both love and faith in these words.

Impressive indeed!

RC Langill
Member

since 2008-03-09

Posts 104

8 posted 2008-07-30 09:53 PM

I admire the strength of your words: simple, few, clear but also meaning more. To the question page -- book? or chivalry? I expect the answer is "Yes"

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2008-07-30 09:59 PM

smile...

I think this is a first for me.

I wanna be ink!

yer lovely

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