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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-10 03:57 PM



In its
Sweep –
The wind strips everything to the
Bareness of the soul.

Give yourself to every
Breeze.




© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Danny Cobb
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1 posted 2008-07-10 05:12 PM


an interesting an visually seductive poem. I like tyhe imagry you used.

   Danny

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2 posted 2008-07-10 09:08 PM


beautiful breeze
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3 posted 2008-07-10 09:47 PM


wow....brings back many a memory!

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graeshine2006
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4 posted 2008-07-10 10:55 PM


Wow - i might have to save this one to read it over and over, because so far, every time, I've read it (3 thus far), I've thought of something different!  Cool one!
RC Langill
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5 posted 2008-07-10 11:00 PM


The wind in your words reveals the power of the zephyr.

Thank you for making us pause and feel it.


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6 posted 2008-07-11 08:01 AM


So so beautiful!


Margherita

2islander2
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7 posted 2008-07-11 10:40 AM


ery beautiful and poetic, this is a great use of winds.

   yann

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8 posted 2008-07-11 01:27 PM


love it!!

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9 posted 2008-07-11 02:34 PM


I love to feel the breeze~
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10 posted 2008-07-11 06:04 PM


That's actually a scarey thought.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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11 posted 2008-07-11 06:43 PM


enjoyed
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12 posted 2008-07-11 08:31 PM


Beautiful.
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