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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2008-07-29 02:29 PM



I have projected myself
to the extent in which
I can barely abide the harsh
judgment and condemnation
placed upon you for carrying
the burden of my own darkness
and even as I scoff at your
bowed and awkward gait
that threatens to trample me
into the mire of self-loathing,
I cannot help but wonder...

What were you like...
before me ?

***

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-07-29 02:38 PM


Wow! Pretty powerful (and honest). Uriah.
                               Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-07-29 05:52 PM


Brilliant!!

Love,
Margherita

Veni Mortem
Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43

3 posted 2008-07-31 09:12 PM


Brilliant and powerful, indeed. ^^
I like the words you used in this as well, that's my kind of vocabulary! ^^

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