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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2008-07-28 12:44 PM

*   *   *
She thought her tears
were going to raise
the level of the ocean,
till he reached over
and sipped them
from her eyes
            one by one ...

*   *   *

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2008-07-28 01:30 PM

Oh, Margherita! This is so you - original, sensual, beautiful and compassionate!

I am surmising that the poem came first, then the photo, as with "no more"?

- Owl

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

2 posted 2008-07-28 01:30 PM

This leaves me speechless. These few brief lines contain an infinity of knowledge about love.
Margherita... this is amazing.

Lynda

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2008-07-28 01:52 PM

WOW!!!

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

4 posted 2008-07-28 02:38 PM

Hi Margherita, grief expressed with great compassion. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2008-07-28 03:05 PM

Wow...stunningly
beautiful Margherita!

Love,
Eric

Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

6 posted 2008-07-28 04:27 PM

Ah - thats cute.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2008-07-28 05:20 PM

So lovely...so you.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-07-28 06:51 PM

Margherita!

Another GREAT read!

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2008-07-28 07:12 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2008-07-28 08:21 PM

My,oh,my! Sigh, oh, sigh! Margherita, I'm speechless! ~ but I certainly was moved by the sensuousity of this write.

Your pen spills liquid gold.

Love you!
Linda xo

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

11 posted 2008-07-29 02:03 AM

simply beautiful...

Inspired-8

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

12 posted 2008-07-29 09:35 AM

my friend,
this is special. it makes one grsping for air. as if the beauty of your piece has stolen it from him.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

13 posted 2008-07-29 11:39 AM

wow. thanks for turning a cliche into something so unique and delightful. yes, the persistence of one by one

nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

14 posted 2008-07-29 12:51 PM

Tears are not a proof of weakness but always remains a symbol to nobility of humanitarian In the best feelings and expression about it.
there are many kinds of tears and always bear Expressive feelings about it.

the Proverb says.. each eye wept behind it a heart.

thank you dear you are wonderful

accept my pass

regards

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

15 posted 2008-07-29 01:55 PM

This is amazing, Margherita! So much in so few ... I absolute adore this! to the library...

~miscellanea~

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

16 posted 2008-07-30 05:27 AM

Margherita

Such a beautiful poem. I think it is the one that I will take to bed with me this morning.

Lovely.

A

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

17 posted 2008-07-30 04:55 PM

Hello Margherita...........How filled with romance, a sip of tear, this poem, and you. Lovely!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

18 posted 2008-07-30 04:56 PM

You are all so very kind, thank you from my heart.

Love,
Margherita

Sic Sempes Tyrannis
Junior Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 11

19 posted 2008-07-30 06:38 PM

Relly great short poem, you combine lots of emotions, please have a look at my poems.

-Sic-

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

20 posted 2008-07-30 07:08 PM

Dear Margherita,

This is a very lovely romantic poem.

Unfortunately, I can’t conceive of doing that. I’m afraid I’m not the romantic type. There are such people in the world.

Bobby

scorpio eyes shut
Junior Member

since 2008-07-24

Posts 31
kerala, india

21 posted 2008-07-31 03:15 AM

i believe, this is what poetry is all about- its beauty, its strength are all exemplified in your lines. sheer pleasure.

apes531
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since 2008-07-23

Posts 35

22 posted 2008-07-31 03:29 AM

this is deep
this is what poetry is about

Sic Sempes Tyrannis
Junior Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 11

23 posted 2008-07-31 04:51 AM

I know this isnt about the poem, but your experienced here and would know the answer to my proble:

when i post a poem i got 0,1 or 3 replys... I think its because they go down the list very quickly, how can i stop this?

Thanks,

-Sic-

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