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ramisf
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0 posted 2008-07-27 01:08 PM


Poem in the name of Maya

May your days be full of sweet roses
Asking God to send you to heaven
Years may grant you virtue in doses
And from your roses collect seven


Notorious Poet

[This message has been edited by ramisf (07-27-2008 08:20 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-07-27 03:07 PM


This is so lovely.  Welcome to PiP.

At the risk of sounding totally ignorant, what does 'seve' mean?  My dictionary does not have this word.  It lingers on my mind and has stirred my curiousity.

Alison

ramisf
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2 posted 2008-07-27 08:19 PM


the word is "seven" her lucky number is seven. sorry for the inconvenience. i'll correct it

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3 posted 2008-07-27 10:31 PM


Thank you for coming back and correcting that.  I was truly puzzled.  Also, I do that too - drop the letters off the ends of words.  Good thing that we have a window of time to edit, huh.

Have a good evening.
A

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4 posted 2008-07-28 05:37 PM


A very romantic blessing. Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2008-07-28 07:14 PM


Enjoyed...James
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