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PaulPerrona
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since 2008-07-27

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New York, USA

0 posted 2008-07-27 02:53 AM

"Portrait" by PaulPerrona

In my mind, the hand of inspiration
Flies upon the canvas of imagination
And creates with crystal precision there
A vision of Beauty beyond compare.

Softly tumbling tresses spun
From shining strands of summer sun
That quietly cascade in rivulets of gold
To splash upon awaiting shoulders.

Eyes that have never seen before
One who shall see them forevermore,
Twin sapphire stars set against
A flawless sky of satin skin.

There, slips the faintest ghost of a smile
From lips of a shape most beguiling.
One, a crimson cupid's bow
Crowns the crescent one below.
Flushed and full, they meet as if
Pushed into a gentle kiss.

The flowing curve of a glowing cheek
Frames a portrait of Beauty so unique,
The highest place She shall always hold
Inside the gallery of my soul.
Let Her be known to all those whom
Look for Her in my nom de plume.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-07-27 06:21 AM

Welcome to Pip! I enjoyed your first entry, a very nice tribute to ? Paula?

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-07-27 10:21 AM

A wonderful first entry into the blue halls
Paul. Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2008-07-27 10:56 AM

Beautiful writing! Can't find Mona Lisa in your name so I'm not even going to try. Wait, got one guess... Laura?

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-07-27 12:24 PM

What a beautiful portrait you paint, Paul.
Welcome to PIP.
Ida

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2008-07-27 12:33 PM

Wonderful first post, excellent cadence...
My guess is Eva Peron, the doll face you describe...other thoughts ventured into the cosmos.
Welcome to Passions!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2008-07-27 12:36 PM

What an elegant entrance you have made, Paul.
This is a lovely waltz of words, and so very captivating,

A real beauty you've got here.

Welcome, welcome!!!!

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
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7 posted 2008-07-27 02:49 PM

Oh, so lovely and what an entrance. You have entranced me.

Alison

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2008-07-27 08:54 PM

Paul~
Welcome to the halls of PiP~

Such a lovely entrance you've made~

Whoever 'she' is ... she is most fortunate to have you paint her in such glowing terms~

I encourage you to read a lot ... reply to those poets you've read ... and have a great time in our wonderful circle of poets and friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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