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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the monotone weave we did leaving color out of our wires just twisting them together because it seemed time was precious and what we were doing was just urgent like the thunder that runs with assorted lightning places out of order but necessary just not planned right there at the time it crashes into or the sudden storms in ignition gushing down from some northern and coating everything with residue that was a surprise to even the storm just how bad it needed to release and then you said I talk to much when there is more work to be done in the remodeling of your proper tease into something with a more racy innuendo that is befitting a woman like yourself when you have that look in your eyes ________________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-25-2008 12:13 PM).] |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
..... sir ...... You have a wonderful pen in the world of words. Makes the reader lives in a world of creativity you are Innovator and do not need my testimony thank you nourzihane |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend nourzihane, most humble thanks to you you do bless me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Now this is "pure" D.S.  M ~~loved it all~~ |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
"pure" for sure! |
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alan a Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 17india |
this is just great...absolutely. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yummy like chocolate. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
glistening and slick she's lightning in a bottle a simmering storm. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms MMs thanks babe ___________ Ms nymph, you do make me smile when you massage my words. _________ Alan, humble thanks to you _________ G'panx. Thanks so much for the read. __________ Ms indi. I would take a bottle of that anyday, thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Perfect lines, dear D.! Inspiring poem. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend for your eyes |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Okay, your poetry is like some magic carpet that sweeps me up and away. I love this and I love riding the words of your mind. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, I enjoy you riding it too..did you leave oatmeal on the carpet again? |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
great one |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm.....lovelilicious Mr Daark...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
storms are lovely when you have that look in your eyes dang darkdaddy....your words move me smooth |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Nope, no oatmeal. Justa trail of almond rocha in case someone would ever need to rescue me. Or maybe I'll get a craving and backtrack to eat the crumbs of candy. That'll work too. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend poddarku, thank you for the touch _____________________ ms r&b, thanks babe for the eyes __________________ ms gs, thanks hon for touching this one ___________________ ms ali-san..hmmmmmmmmmmm ok I'll bite |
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